I've received some feedback and will be trying hard to get these changes in place before 12/12 - I've received a few comments, and upon reflection, agree that Darin needs some character development. Wendy wanting to wait for the wedding night is not realistic. Giancarlo character development is just flat missing.

I completely agree and will be making adjustments are trying to get them online by this coming Friday. If you've purchased a paperback / Hardback copy congratulations you have a very rare 1st edition - and if you reach out to me here, I'll ensure you receive a free PDF copy of the fixed version - just send me a screenshot of your confirmed purchase and I'll respond directly with the fixed PDF as a thank you, and apology for the premature release.

Thank you for your support and I hope you'll like the adjustments that have been suggested.